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I scrambled to my feet and punched the air, "YEAH!" The pain searing it way through my limbs only a distraction for a moment, but it was something I had to hide. I hooked my arms out of the singlet and pulled it around my waist before turning to my opponent and offering a hand.
ReplyDelete"Good game, the better man one." He told me as he pulled me into a strong hug.
"Thanks man." It felt great being in this seniors body, and to win the championship was only a bonus. I'd got inside Duncan six months ago--he's my first. I'd seen the 5'6" athlete running through the park a few times in the morning. I saw a strong core, and a muscular build.
I'd already made the decision to disappear and become someone else--I had nothing to hang about for--but everything to live for. So the day came, and I was waiting--sitting on a bench. He jogged past, just as he always did and I called him over. He stood there, confident just a little bit of arrogance and impatience.
I got to my feet, and although I was average height I was head and shoulders above him. I grabbed him and pushed a cloth to his mouth, he struggled for a moment before going limp in my arms.
There was no turning back now, I carried him behind some shrubs and undressed him; a vest, long shorts, jock and trainers. I rolled him onto his front knowing I didn't have much time. He glistened with sweat, a strong powerful back. Shucking my own clothes I straddled the young athlete, I stroked my palms across his shoulders. I was taller and bigger, the spell suggested there was no limits to the possession--I'd hoped it wasn't just an oversight.
I murmured the spell, and my hands slipped inside Duncan. I felt my legs begin to merge with his. I started to wriggle and twist into his torso as y arms found their way inside Duncan's. I could feel the tightness the more I squeezed inside. I was amazed this was working, and finally only my head remained. I took a gulp of air, and pushed inside. Blinking, I rolled over my head was muzzy, swimming with thoughts and ideas. Sitting up I looked at my arms, flexing. I stroked and touched my new pecs and abs, and admired my thick thighs. Getting to my feet, I swayed a little and reflected on how much closer I was to the ground, then I remember who I was. I touched my face, strong angular features with thick cropped hair--I'd done it I was Duncan Matthews.
Pulling on the sports gear, I continued the jog around the park--it was effortless. As I jogged out of the park, I sifted through my new memories. He'd signed up for the wrestling team, I smiled--that would be perfect. When I was at school I was state champion. I was sure that with Duncan's body and my skills I'd win it again.
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ReplyDeleteI was walking along he street minding my own business, deep in thought about Jack--my brother. He was being a jerk, not only to me, but to the whole family.
ReplyDeleteMy thoughts were broken when a teenager ran past me, he was slight and skinny with a beanie pulled tightly over his head. "Stop him," came a shout from somewhere behind me--I couldn't see.
My attention returned to the kid as he dodged around a corner, and I followed him. He ran past the only other person in the street, a workman sitting on a squat wall smoking a cigarette. I watched as the kid vaulted the wall and hedge startling the worker.
I stopped in my tracks as I saw an arm reach around the guys neck and pull him backwards.
There was muffled cries, and I could see the shrubs moving furiously. Sprinting over I chanced a look.
The worker was splayed out on his back, his arms thrashing. Pinning him down was the kid, who seemed a lot stronger than he appeared.
I covered my mouth and gasped as I watched the kids form soften and lose definition. What followed was something quiet alien. The kids form pushed into the workers mouth, by now it has turned to a silvery liquid. The workers body twitched and convulsed, but finally gave up any resistance and what remained of the kid entered the man.
Thoughts were wheeling in my head; how was this possible. I heard the voices again. "Did you see which way he went?" "He went that way. You and you go that way, we'll circle around the other way."
I wondered what the kid had done, when I heard rustle of leaves. The worker stepped over the wall and looked at me. I nodded at the bag of groceries on the path and he sat down and picked up the dropped cigarette and took a long drag.
My eyes flicked over to the worker, he looked just the same as when I first saw him.
The shouts grew louder, and two officers charged around the corner. They stopped in front of us. "A kid," one said breathlessly, "did he come past here?"
I looked at the worker, then back at the officers. "Yeah he did." From the corner of my eye I could see the worker tense. "He ran off that way," I added pointing vaguely in the opposite direction.
"Are you sure?" the officer asked.
"Slim guy, beanie hat?"
"And you've both been here together? And at no point in time did you lose sight of each other?"
"What kind of question is that? Is the kid dangerous?"
"Yes, now answer the question."
"We've been sitting here for the past thirty minutes waiting for a bus," I replied nodding at the stop. "Isn't that right," I asked the worker.
"Yeah, say do you know when one is due?" He replied.
The officers said nothing, and ran off in the direction I'd shown them.
When they were out of sight I turned to the worker. "Thanks," he said rubbing his fingers through his scruffy beard.
"I saw you--" I composed myself. "I saw you get inside him, like a liquid or something."
"I needed somewhere new to hide, he was just at the wrong place, but the right place for me."
"Is he OK?"
"He ceased to exist as you know it once I'd taken him. I've taken his form now until I need to take another."
"Can you show me how to do it?"
He frowns and looks confused. "You can't, your human physiology won't allow it."
I nodded calmly, "So you're alien?"
"I am."
"I have a proposition for you," I grinned thinking about my troublesome brother. "Somewhere safe."
I got to my feet, the worker followed my lead and collected the bags of groceries. "Safe?"
We walked back to my house, I knew my parents were out and my brother was alone in the house. "Somewhere where you can stay as long as you want."
I heard a cough from the restrooms, then a grunt. Someone was trying to attract my attention. I chucked Jerry on the chin and sent him on his way--a good kid, but a little wayward, but I could fix that.
ReplyDeletePushing open the door I stepped into the restrooms; Jake was waiting for me inside. "You wanted to see me boss?"
"Jake my man, how long have you been working for me know? Eight months?" I asked him.
He scratched at his chin, and pondered for a moment. "If you say so."
That's what I liked about Jake, he was a simple thing with a positive determination that earned him a body that many yearned for--including myself. "I want you to take Jerry under your wing, train him. He's a good kid, but he needs a strong hand to keep him on rails."
"Huh?"
I rubbed my temples, "Look after him, make sure he doesn't do anything stupid--" I thought for a moment, and added. "At the gym, I don't want you following him around like a nursemaid."
"A whats maid?"
"Just show him how to lift, help his achieve his goals," I sighed and Jake looked at me blankly. Surely he couldn't be this dense. "Turn around, I'll do it myself."
He grinned widely. "Sure boss, whatever you say," he replied turning his back to me. I pushed into his back, and found myself enveloped in his muscular body. He let out a euphoric groan as I shifted inside his frame and took control. His mind was fuzzy, and distracted as I tried to read his thoughts, and as the mist cleared I learnt that he understood our conversation perfectly. He knew I'd lose patience, and push into him. What he wanted was the high he got whenever I got inside his body. The endorphins released when I took control--he was getting a high!
I chuckled, deep and low in my acquired body. He was smarted than I'd thought. Still his loss, I was in control of his body now and access to all his memories. I smirked, and the date he'd planned with a girl from the store that sold the supplements.
I jumped a couple of times, and shook my shoulders--just to loosen up. I flexed admiring Jake's physique in the mirror. He was one of my favourites, and I wanted Jerry to work hard so I could add him to my circle.
Stepping out of the restroom I spotted Jerry leaning on the reception counter. "Hey Jerry, got a moment," I called out.
He turned and his eyes brightened. It's then I realised that he secretly worshiped Jake, a heavy admiration. He walked over. "Sup' Jake?"
"The boss asked me to train you up, help you bulk up, reach your goals," I said keeping in character.
"Sweet. Can we start now?" He asked, and I realised he hadn't taken his eyes off my muscles.
I wondered how far I could take take this weird fascination with Jake's body. "Let's go somewhere private where we can discuss your program," I whispered in his ear.
For the first time he looked me in the face, "Awesome."
I put a large arm around his shoulder and walked him to the office. This was going to be fun.
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ReplyDeleteMirko from maletransformationstories
Thanks, why not give it a try yourself. Here's the brother I had in mind.
ReplyDeletei really like the perspective you chose for this one it was different and interesting.
ReplyDeleteThat was a lot of awesome stories Sean, thanks for the great work.
ReplyDeleteThanks, something a little different huh?
ReplyDeleteYou're welcome, thanks for saying :)
ReplyDeleteWould be so nice if you could find a nice and handsome man as Claire Fiancé. (Ooops, am I asking too much? Great story)
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
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