(4) NEW STORIES IN THE COMMENTS
Saturdays the readers get a chance to write something, use the picture as inspiration or perhaps suggest something for others to write. Two pictures, but check in the new comments section you can add pictures now so post your own stories/pictures!**THE STORIES/REQUESTS ARE IN THE COMMENTS**
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Awesome story, thanks for writing it.
ReplyDeleteHaha, loved it Yaz. Thanks for sending it in.
ReplyDeletecreepy ! pic number 2
ReplyDeletelol its a continuation of the skins in carpe noctem from angels series very well done
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ReplyDeleteI snapped a picture and sent it to Instagram, "Fuck people are so dumb."
"When girls tell me I'm a stud, and that I'm hung like a horse I just laugh it off--because they'd never believe me."
"Even when I take a photo without the mask on, they still laugh." I pick at the join where my neck and body meet and pull. The pink skin stretches as reveal more of my dark skin below. I reach in and scratch a thick muscle, "ahhh, thats better."
I'd taken Tony's identity soon after landing on the planet, we too where a humanoid type species but originally derived from horses rather than monkeys.
Not unsurprisingly we were built a lot larger than your regular human, which was why I selected Tony. Although he was strong, he was no match for me when I knocked on his door at 3am.
I quickly overpowered him, and set the machine to work that would allow me to integrate into human life. An hour later he was ready. With the head separated, I started to pull Tony's form over my own. As I did I felt my own body compress and tighten as conformed to Tony's physique.
As I pulled the last of his body over my own, I looked at myself in the mirror. It disgusted me, naked and hairless. I felt my pecs and traced my hands to my waist, I would have to get used to it.
With my transformation almost complete I lifted Tony's head and pushed my snout down the neck. Again I felt my head being remoulded, shaped to fill the mask. I pulled hard and felt it seal with the body I was wearing.
Tony looked back at me, it was not only a perfect disguise, it had been improved upon.
Amazing!
ReplyDeleteThanks ShadowFox, the story was a a bit of a strange one.
ReplyDeletethe strange is what makes it interesting and unique. your descriptions are great, i could see it in my head super clearly, despite the weird. you left enough for me to fill in the rest on my own. so good writing technique too.
ReplyDeleteWow, that's the best complement I've had. It's just what any author is trying to achieve (I believe).
ReplyDeleteBig thanks :)
Thanks for sending in that very detailed story -- wow.
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