Guys, I assume you like the work we do here (not always a lot of comments, so we may just be talking to ourselves!)
But here’s your chance to shine! for the next couple of weeks I’ll be posting an image, one a week.
Caption it or write a short scene and we might just make it into a story for you!
Don’t be shy – be anonymous if you want!
this is lame you should write more stories..
ReplyDelete.. there have been a lot of GREAT stories posted in these 'caption this!' posts.
ReplyDeleteI like to think I'm giving people the oppertunity write their own stuff, stuff that interests them.
Why don't you write something? there must of been a picture you thought 'Wow! .. but what if..."
.. do it!
Contribute, don't criticize!!!
ReplyDeleteDude, I am so not giving this body back. I might have promised Andrew I would but it feels to good to be young again. He asked me to win this match for him with all my experience at wrestling, and now that I won it for him and I have his body... I am going all the way. Not to mention this large sausage in his pants. I swear, I got hard twice on the mat. Maybe now I can get another hot stud to fool around with... I wonder what my competitor is doing later tonight, he seemed distracted by my "growth"...
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ReplyDelete"Whatever"? Wow, really?! Someone is being a spoiled pubescent. And I mean it, if you have the time to be criticizing, spend it on more meaningful things like actually contributing instead of writing a shoddy one word comeback. It might be my own opinion, but if you want a cheap thrill that's fine. But as you're already getting this for free, don't complain.
ReplyDeleteis criticizing banned or something? i'm just saying what its my mind, i think its what the comment box is for
ReplyDeleteI don't think your 1st entry was a comment, more like frustration.
ReplyDeleteoh is it bad? should have put rainbows and butterflies on it instead.
ReplyDeleteat least have some tact, since u apparently dont have any constructive criticism.
ReplyDeletethis site started to suck more and more each day wish ericstratton still managed the group but i got nothing against sean Mitchell here all im saying is we used to have like 5 or 7 new stories per week back then. and now all we got to see is this.. i know im an asshole but thats what i think it is
ReplyDeleteThanks for that; comments are useful. We miss Erick, but it's his choice to move on.
ReplyDeleteFunny enough this isn't my full time job, I enjoy writing and choose to share it with you guys. This is why it's important to let authors feel appreciated, because they will write more (believe me it works).
I was hoping the pictures I've been posting would inspire others to write, and as we've seen there have been some excellent work. The recent additions to 'The Rookie' is a fine example.
As someone who has made captions in the past they are very time consuming. You shoudl try it and see what people have to do to make them. It takes a lot of work and so what we get from Sean is good. He puts effort into his it isn't like they are short.
ReplyDeleteTry doing it everyday for a month. Erick and I have done that before in a challenge and it is hard. Your mind starts to run dry after a couple weeks.
i honestly think this is a neat idea. everyone can look at a single picture and each one can come up with something completely different. rather than a single image having a single story, you can get a single image with different plots and outcomes.
ReplyDeletethe idea can also help an author come up with ideas for stories. it also helps them see what interests their viewers and helps them gain new ideas. sometimes you can get something that you never thought of or help get through a writers block.
anyway, if you want to contribute, then do so. if you want to read some of the work people came up with, enjoy the work. criticism is a great way to improve stories and pieces of work, but when its coming off as insulting or rude, it isn't welcome.
we get it. you want the moderator to write more work. there's a life outside the virtual world. he can't be on here all the time to write caps or stories. we could at least help him come up with new ideas or even write a few stories ourselves.
anyway, sorry if i went overboard. saw what was going on and just had to put my two cents in.
Brody, Bodyswaper thanks for the comments and support.
ReplyDeleteI can understand to some when it's a disappointment when there is nothing new to see. But it takes time, so be patient there will be more coming soon.
fair enough. that explain a lot sorry for the rude words
ReplyDeleteWhy did Eric Stratton leave "move one"? Is he tired of the boy swap fiction or whats going on? I miss him =( I love you Eric! ... I hope no homophobia got to him.
ReplyDeleteI saw Tyler walking by. He looked my way and a camera man walked up and tried to take a picture. Tyler quickly grabbed my hand and began shaking it as if he actually had a relationship with me. After the camera man walked off I shook my head. "What a fucking fake. He is always after what he thinks people like to see," I thought. I quickly snapped back into my original mindset, I wasn't here to criticize him. I had a bigger mission. I subtly watched him until he left the main arena and I followed him out. The hallway was long and dark, I could barely see, but I did see him entering an empty dressing room. I followed quietly making sure that I stay far enough behind for him to not notice me. When I creeped into the dressing room I saw a pile of clothes lying near his locker and I heard the shower running. I picked up a small door stopper from on the floor and stood just outside of the shower hiding behind the wall. I waited for what seemed like hours until the water stopped. My heart was pumping, it was so loud I was sure he could hear it. He walked out of the shower and before he could see me I swung and hit his head with the door stopper. He immediately fell to the floor. "I have to work quickly," I thought. This is only my second possession and the first was a willing one. I pulled off my clothes and laid on top of his body. I began to slip in taking control of each of his body parts one-by-one until they were all under my control. I picked up my hands and checked them to make sure they were his. I stood and stretched and walked to the mirror. Standing there staring back at me was the naked body of Tyler. A sly smile crept across my new face. I quickly threw on some clothes and ran out to his Audi. I drove back to my house. I walked in and upstairs to my bedroom where my wife was lying on the bed sleeping. I walked over and tapped her shoulder. She rolled over and was shocked to see a young man standing beside her bed, but she knew exactly who it was. "I told you that I would get Tyler to come to our house for your birthday!" I said with a smile. My wife had a weird crush on this guy and we really needed to spice up our lives so we each have to possess someone on the other's birthday. I began stripping down to nothing. "Now, are you really ready to meet Tyler?" I said hopping into the bed beside her. And the rest is history....
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